Hi Julena,

Your poem is eloquently written, your use of varied forms of imagery does wonders to immerse the reader within the world you have established within your work. I would like to see you use maybe bit more imagery using the other senses to really tie-in to your work and make it bit more exquisite.

Keep up the good work!

Regards,

Brandon

 

Julena’s Blog:

https://julenaoliva.wordpress.com/2017/09/20/american-lit-blog-6/comment-page-1/#comment-54

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