Hi Natalie,

Your creative is one which explicitly immerses the reader into the text with the use of highly emotive language. The despair is extremely powerful and almost radiates across the poem. The creative is powerfully written and your eloquence should be highly commended.

Keep up the good work!

Regards,

Brandon

 

 

 

Natalies Blog Post:

https://natalie4820.wordpress.com/2017/09/13/drunken-despair/comment-page-1/#comment-35

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