Hi Amy,

Your analytical perception of Miles Franklin’s writing is truly insightful and provides an in depth and well thought out interpretation towards your view of the text. That said, please do try to be mindful of becoming repetitive in your writing style in particular the line “The repetition of the word ‘weariness’ “

Keep up the good work!

Regards,

Brandon

 

Amy’s Post:

https://amyraso.wordpress.com/2017/09/24/language-choice-and-poetic-power-miles-franklin-a-drought-idyll/

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